Palimpsest

Genre

Poetry

Finish

2nd Place

Student

Elijah Flechter

Award

Robert and Marcy Branski Poetry Scholarship

School

Traverse City West Senior High

Year

Senior

We wrote our names in the sand,

knowing the tide would come,

but still, we hoped—

maybe the waves would forget

and leave us, just for a moment, to exhale.

We carved words in bathroom stalls,

painted over, but still rigid,

marking time in ordinary places—

quiet rebellions of the unnoticed,

pyramids half-buried in dust—

a great attempt at resisting time’s erosion.

We built small monuments

with hands that trembled,

dreaming of immortality in fleeting acts.

A footstep here, a glance there—

only we remember the stories that didn’t stick.

The world forgets all but the loudest voices,

Yet our whispers fill the cracks,

sink into the walls,

half-erasures still legible in the right light—

proof that in in every quiet act,

in every unnoticed gesture, we were here.

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Elijah Flechter

We wrote our names in the sand,
knowing the tide would come,
but still, we hoped—
maybe the waves would forget
and leave us, just for a moment, to exhale.

We carved words in bathroom stalls,
painted over, but still rigid,
marking time in ordinary places—
quiet rebellions of the unnoticed,
pyramids half-buried in dust—
a great attempt at resisting time’s erosion.

We built small monuments
with hands that trembled,
dreaming of immortality in fleeting acts.
A footstep here, a glance there—
only we remember the stories that didn’t stick.

The world forgets all but the loudest voices,
Yet our whispers fill the cracks,
sink into the walls,
half-erasures still legible in the right light—
proof that in in every quiet act,
in every unnoticed gesture, we were here.